Poetry… I’m Liking It

I am truly enjoying being a part of an amazing MFA program. It’s fully online, and my professors are nothing short of incredible! I am new to the world of poetry (shame, I know!), but I am learning how amazing it truly is! Here was a fun assignment from Homer’s Odyssey where we had to take a specific scene and write it from our own perspective. Lord knows I can’t touch Homer, but I had a great time dipping my hand in his work. This is based on Book V. The explanation is below. :)

The blessings of Kalypso sent Odysseus on his way.
He drifted slowly, steadily, suspended on the waves of the sapphire sea,
when Poseidon’s harvest of evils sought him out with the forcefulness of the breath of the world’s four winds.
Grand in their task, they rattled his vessel to its core.
North to South, East to West, brothers in his demise. They blew him one to another
like a plaything meant for children’s hands. The blue of the sky just a memory, the salty sea now with its waters of black
begged for him, darkened like Hades for which he grieved, for which he knew he should not have forsaken in Troy.
Now, lost in the world of waves that pressed against the endless and darkening horizon, he would be no more, swallowed whole in the belly of this sea.
Is this truly to be the end? Would he ever stroke the face of his wife again, hear her tender words whisper him to slumber. Would he ever again reach for her warm hand and hold it to his mouth, smell the lavender of her skin, tuck away the tendrils of her hair?
For this he mourned more than for his own life, though his body begged for the mercy of death while the scratch of salt slid down his throat and bloated his lungs with a burning fire.
But then hope.
Beloved Leukothea.
Beautiful, true, goddess, angel, savior, friend of mortal.
Her pity found Odysseus at his greatest of pleas. He clung to his raft until it held him no more, the wood and the binding, the mast, gone. Clothed in magic bestowed by Leukothea, he found the shore, fought to touch the soft soil, clawed at life with will, with spirit, with fight.
Scheria.
Triumph.
Odysseus climbed into a bed of peaceful leaves, wrapping himself in slumber, fighting to forget.

This short story is based on Book V, Odysseus’s departure from a nymph named Kalypso, who has held him captive with her for seven years. Zeus orders her to let him go. The gods always have something tricky going on, so of course, Odysseus has his doubts, but he doesn’t hesitate. Kalypso helps him with tools and sustenance to make his voyage, giving him one last chance to stay with her at his own free will, even offering him immortality, but he’s desperate to leave to get home to his wife and country. In the spirit of mischief, Poseidon, just for kicks, cooks up a storm that almost steals Odysseus’s life. But Leukothea, a former mortal now an immortal, saves him and helps him get to the safety of Scheria.
This scene fits perfectly in Homer’s work thematically in that Homer paints a beautiful journey picture. It’s full of hardships and character, and the evolution of an epic hero, in this case, a man named Odysseus, who is growing into who he is meant to be for his grand arrival. Dramatically, on this journey, we have a man on a mission, with all odds against him. Our hero has battled with man, god and nature. Between battling his wife’s suitors, battling pesky and tampering gods who either love him too much for his own good, or dislike him, and clinging to life at the mercy of nature and the elements, Odysseus is a fighter. He wants to survive. Book V is a clear example of having the gods in your favor and having them at odds with you all at the same time. He overcomes one hurdle, getting released by Kalypso at last, to being tormented and almost killed by Poseidon’s mischief, to finding favor with Leukothea. There is no lack of drama here. Each battle that he overcomes, builds and strengthens him into who he is meant to be. He is emotionally, intellectually, and physically, perfect. Aesthetically, this story is just a beautiful depiction of man fighting for a dream, fighting to survive. There is beauty in the heroism, the journey, and the language.

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Happy Valentine’s Day!

     Happy Valentine’s Day!  I remember my first Valentine’s Day married to my sweetheart. He bought me flowers and “The Notebook.” We picked up a delightful dinner, and then I sobbed the rest of the night after we watched the movie. Sooo much has changed since our first Valentine’s Day together!

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   On this special day when billions of dollars will be spent on cards, chocolates and flowers, here’s what I’ll remember about MY Valentine’s celebration this year:

 

1.     My husband and I enjoyed a nice and quiet, child-free dinner with some wonderful friends on Fat Tuesday. Our server gave us beads, but we certainly didn’t have to earn them! We celebrate early every year because on the actual day, my sweetheart, who is the general manager of a restaurant, won’t see anything outside of work until they close for the night, and when he gets home, he drops. Seriously. Therefore, my day and evening will be spent with my other sweethearts, my beautiful children!

 

2. We also celebrated yesterday as a family since my hubby was home.  I made my family chocolate-covered strawberries, brownies, and a delightful chicken dinner. I’m glad he got to enjoy the treats because I guarantee that he would’ve missed out otherwise! 

 

3. Yesterday morning, I offered to make the Rice Crispy treats for our son’s Valentine’s Day party. I bought the ingredients that morning, but got caught up in our own holiday treats and next thing I know, it was time to go teach my night class. When I got home at 10, my husband, who had done homework, Boy Scouts and chocolate candy deliveries to our mothers, was knocked out. But he stirred when I got home, I told him that I needed to make the treats, but then I collapsed right beside him. Next thing I know at midnight when he happened to wake up, he realized I didn’t make the treats, and like a little magical Valentine’s elf, he got right to work! I awoke this morning to heart-shaped treats with red sprinkles, and fell in love with him all over again (as I do quite often!).

 

I am very blessed! I have THE BEST Valentines I could ever ask for! 

What are you Valentine memories this year?

 

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Accurate Medical Writing in your Fiction

     As writers, we love to transport our readers. It’s an honor to know that we were able to make them believe the fear a character felt about dying, or the power of falling in love, or the excitement of waking up on Christmas morning. We strive to use our words to make magic, to take readers on a great adventure to places they may never see in real life, to know what something tastes like, to feel well-deserved and well-earned vindication… We have accountability to our readers to give them our very best.

      Our readers rely on us to make it real, and some will even call us on it if it’s not! And they have a right to! If you buy a defective product from the store, won’t you be in line at customer service the first chance you get? If you go through the drive-thru, and your order is not what you expected, won’t you go back and have it corrected? In the same way, we’re providing our services through our writing. What a job, right? 

     So it didn’t surprise me last week when I stumbled onto a writer’s Twitter page to see what I could retweet in support of them, that I found a reader relentlessly showing their frustration from a piece of work by the writer that inaccurately described an illness that the reader in fact had. The reader was angry, she kept insisting on private messaging the author, she kept verbalizing her discontent. The author, of course, was very gracious in her replies. 

     And that being said, I realize that we’re all learning together, and reading that interaction actually helped me, which is why I wanted to pass this along to help my friends on this writing journey that were on together.

      As writers, we also are researchers. What was in like in the 1940s? How would I describe an engine in a reconstructed Ford Mustang? What would my character do in Paris? And then there’s the medical aspect. How would I write about Diabetes? Or Chemotherapy treatment? Or infertility? Or a phobia? Here is a wonderful Web site called “Romance University.” There’s an article titled, “Medical Speak for Writers by Wynter Daniels,” at http://romanceuniversity.org/2011/06/13/medical-speak-for-writers-by-wynter-daniels/

     In this post, Wynter has provided invaluable links to several resources for any range of medical conditions your character might have, to even being treated for a specific injury and where on the body you might want that injury to be for the specific outcome you’re looking for! I have actually bookmarked this fantastic page, and I LOVE to share a good find! And finding it was as easy as doing a Web search! I hope this helps! 

Hugs to everyone, and “Write on!”